this week we have been learning about summaries.I write a summary about a farmer named ben jackson he made a heart for his aunt.
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I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Great work Mia. I particularly liked how Kate "crossed over" to you from the news-room. Your summary was good and you were confident reading it out. I love how you were facing the camera and had your book in a position where you could read it and face the camera. Remember next time to put what our task and learning intention was in your blurb with your post so your viewers know. Thanks for your hard work Mia!
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DeleteI like how you said "back to you Kate" you should work on looking at the camera. And I like how you added a blurb saying what he did but short.
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